Thursday, 28 May 2015

My career explanation writing

The group I am working in is spelling.

My career goal is to become a personal train, I want to do this because I am interested in
health, fitness, helping people to get healthy and  how the body works. The Likely hood
of getting this job is very high because of the increasing demand for their services in New
Zealand. The average pay for a personal trainer is $25-35 per hour working for someone or 
company. In order to get this job I will need take certain classes in high school.

Thursday, 7 May 2015

My Poem #1

sloths are rear, their cuddly like a teddy bear.
they hang from trees and swing through  the
breeze, sloths are sleepy just like Taylor.

the language  features that i used were:
Alliteration, hyperbola and rhyme.
i chosed these language features
because it sounded good and it worked
at best with my topic/poem

thanks for reading :]